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On Breakaway

Spear my heart with love Let it beat; Let it clap Open my eyes with the truth Let it see; Let not be fooled Glance at me once or twice Behold and distinguish all spice Perceive not the bad but nice Quietly do becoming wise Everyday there are changes Find, explore all that enhances Hurdle, succeed all ravages Breakaway from all damages by: olive_eloi 5:40pm 01/06/2014 ----------------------»»»»»

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Date: 11/24/2014 11:20:00 AM
Lovely short piece Olive. Now where's that spear, James :)
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Date: 1/7/2014 5:06:00 AM
Nicely penned
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/7/2014 3:49:00 PM
thanks.. :) God bless you. :)

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