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On Bended Knee

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On Bended Knee

awareness of what she had done
liberated tears, one by one

memories flooded her musing
sorrow struck for what she’d be losing

her vision began to blur
her words no more than a slur

“how did I get to this point”?
a moment, she could not appoint

where there was hurt, she felt numb
her core felt vacant like a drum

eyelids curtain, all became dark
nothing now but a question mark

“will God forgive and welcome me”?
I pray He will, on bended knee

April 21, 2012
For Paula's CONTEST "...and with a sip"

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  1. Date: 5/4/2012 6:30:00 AM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/4/2012 5:43:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your win in the "And With a Sip"contest Diana-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 11:51:00 AM
    Congrats Diana on a super write, enjoyed it love mom p.s. lovely tea time yesterday you make my days smile!xxx

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 10:14:00 AM
    congrats on your win Diana-Marie...thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 4/30/2012 8:25:00 AM
    Very nice Diana-Marie. Congratulations

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 8:33:00 PM
    Excellent work..

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 3:41:00 PM
    Artistic work as always my dear friend.Its good to know there is forgiveness to be find in this life.Great write for the contest! Wish you all the best of luck,Diana:) Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 2:46:00 PM
    A unique approach to the contest theme Diana-Marie.. Wishing you the best for the contest xoxo

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 2:40:00 PM
    Your poem is sad, but good. I believe that yes God will forgive you. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 2:04:00 PM
    He will forgive and welcome you! Well written, but sad. - Have a lovely weekend in sunshine Diana-Marie. - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Bombardieri Avatar Diana-Marie Bombardieri
    Date: 4/21/2012 2:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Anne Lise:) this one if for Paula's contest "...and with a sip". It is not based on me at all. Have a sunshiny weekend yourself:)
  1. Date: 4/21/2012 1:35:00 PM
    very beautiful write