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On Barr Trail

ON BARR TRAIL the going is steep – twenty-five percent grade – twelve miles to the top legs tire already we plan to go half way up to where the trees stop from there only rock and no beauty in the climb we brought a feast some four miles along we happen on a meadow, all nature at peace, and this silver stream directly across the path glistening the rocks wonderful to be on this perfect forest glade we shuck shoes and sox, roll the pebbles round wash our aching arms and legs and luxuriate then we see a fawn standing by the wooded edge feasting without fear in such surroundings – this hidden mountain haven – we sense god is near no continuing timberline will have to wait other time and date ........................................... From Manitou Springs Barr Trail goes to the top of Pike's Peak

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Date: 8/9/2013 11:05:00 AM
I am glad that you found that meadow..I could see the place from your description..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/9/2013 11:06:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by "The Laundry"..She might have had a touch of Irish>>Sara
Date: 7/23/2013 11:59:00 PM
Rereading this one. I enjoyed it just as much the second time.
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Date: 7/16/2013 4:59:00 PM
this is really wonderful, Daver. how you painted the scenes of your mountain visit!! Thanks for your comments today. It was great to see you at my poems.
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Date: 7/15/2013 7:03:00 AM
- Daver, I like it.... Nice work! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/14/2013 2:31:00 PM
Hi Dave-r..good to see a post from you..and what a pretty one. Im looking at a picture of a similar place at Mt Lassen..here in Ca. .We did make it to the top..but the trip was the pleasure. BG
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