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On An Ordinary Day

competition entry: It fits in the palm of my hand Holding it with a firm grip I don’t need it to stand I just need it to dip I use it every day I wield it up and down Like a toy I like to play Sometime I smile sometimes I frown Day to day this item I use I work hard and it gives me a hot flush Never being one to abuse I never mistreat my toilet brush. GG 24/11/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/7/2013 4:04:00 AM
You are one of a kind my friend...Like my house and car, I clean my toilet once a year whether it needs it or not...
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Date: 12/3/2013 7:04:00 PM
Ha ha, I thought it was going to be a yo yo. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/3/2013 6:05:00 PM
I love this one, but every day? You use it every day??? BIG congrats, Mandy. I have not seen you in a while and it is a treat to see this one.
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Date: 12/3/2013 4:05:00 PM
hi Mandy congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/3/2013 2:28:00 PM
big congrats on your winning spot, mandy.. hugggs
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Date: 12/3/2013 1:11:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Mandy
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Date: 11/25/2013 5:34:00 AM
I was having an ordinary day Mandy, till i read this gem,, back to your intriguing endings i see, just love these....and this
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Date: 11/24/2013 7:22:00 PM
ha! thanks for the chuckle, mandy...
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Date: 11/24/2013 7:28:00 AM
nicely penned Mandy....I enjoyed the read....
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