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On An Ordinary Day

competition entry: 

It fits in the palm of my hand
Holding it with a firm grip
I don’t need it to stand
I just need it to dip

I use it every day
I wield it up and down
Like a toy I like to play
Sometime I smile sometimes I frown

Day to day this item I use
I work hard and it gives me a hot flush
Never being one to abuse
I never mistreat my toilet brush.
GG 24/11/2013

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  1. Date: 12/7/2013 4:04:00 AM
    You are one of a kind my friend...Like my house and car, I clean my toilet once a year whether it needs it or not...

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Ha ha, I thought it was going to be a yo yo. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 6:05:00 PM
    I love this one, but every day? You use it every day??? BIG congrats, Mandy. I have not seen you in a while and it is a treat to see this one.

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 4:05:00 PM
    hi Mandy congrats on win Shadow x smile hug

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 2:28:00 PM
    big congrats on your winning spot, mandy.. hugggs

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 1:11:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Mandy

  1. Date: 11/25/2013 5:34:00 AM
    I was having an ordinary day Mandy, till i read this gem,, back to your intriguing endings i see, just love these....and this

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 7:22:00 PM
    ha! thanks for the chuckle, mandy...

  1. Date: 11/24/2013 7:28:00 AM
    nicely penned Mandy....I enjoyed the read....