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On An Excursion

on an excursion students are seen glorious their auras speak dreams few have no complain at the time of taking seats few do politics whistling train moves on talking many to other few reserve silence in all their coaches few are busy with own games few sing and few clap faces are tired now as stamina is finished journey is complete Written on 8th Januay2015

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Date: 1/8/2015 2:19:00 PM
You conveyed the weariness of these students, BL. I enjoyed the read!
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Date: 1/8/2015 8:57:00 PM
From just before starting the journey to just before its end on the way enjoyment continues but as the journey is completed we feel tired generally. The difference between before having and after having.. I think so. Train journey is best suited.Thanks my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl

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