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On a Sunny Day

On a Sunny Day Why is it that beauty is so hard to attain We try to reach for it, grab it with our polished nails Until they break off Because we were to stubborn to admit To admit is to realize To realize is to be awake To be awake is ought to be Ought to be not deceived Gautama on his side entering the eternal light Yet, I am asleep Because I can reach for beauty But it vanishes in Fall Resurrects in Spring Flourishes in Summer And is gone by winter As a little bird on the window sill I tend to stand still Looking inside the room Eating my sweet potato pie in the afternoon Supper is there, brown is her hair Eat

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Date: 3/26/2016 2:28:00 AM
Damon De Ryckere, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/23/2016 2:42:00 PM
Excellent poem Damon. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:22:00 PM
Damon, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/22/2016 2:58:00 PM
Beautiful(:
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