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On a String

Communication is the key To open up the door Behind which all emotions wait, To summon or ignore. For when that lock is opened And the feelings freely flow, You might have all the information That you need to know. But when the key is out of reach And you don’t have the facts, It certainly affects the way Your mind or heart reacts. I wish that I could wear this key, Like kids do, on a string, ‘Cause then I’d hold the power Only dialogue can bring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/17/2013 1:21:00 PM
Not unlike Pandora's box, communication sometimes shocks. The topic which you choose to chew can sometimes hurt the both of you. Peace. :)
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Date: 11/11/2013 11:11:00 AM
Clever and amazing. I enjoy rhyme so very much. Thanks for making it this way.
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Date: 11/10/2013 6:40:00 PM
So true so true..:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Date: 11/10/2013 3:49:00 PM
- So true Ilene - well written ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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