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on a slow boat to nowhere

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on a slow boat to nowhere

amidst the thunder and the thuds
of boilers and blocks panting evermore
in a halcyon sea, the territorial gulls
shriek their high-pitched sadness as they soar.

and all throughout the gray outline
the groaning of the waves are heard,
as steel slices through the blackish brine
and lonely hearts are stirred.

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  1. Date: 3/24/2009 8:28:00 AM
    Congratulation on your poem featured today - I liek the way you probed the rose. This one now reminds of a sailor's dream for his home coming. Beautiful imageries. I like it. Love and peace

  1. Date: 11/27/2008 11:31:00 AM
    Very beautiful Amante. Michael