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On a Mat a Pier

deride derision divide division devise a vision play with words like rythym tick something squared is power of two and cubed's the power of three not four that's more are inconsistent seas unfound or foundered I think there four iambic meters cause caucasion indecision in a celtic melded welded mind I find a loss of words incomprehensic in reprehensic pensitivity

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Date: 1/12/2010 11:40:00 AM
Very clever writing here, Donald. Will have to study more about this form ...
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Date: 1/12/2010 4:59:00 AM
Congrats Donald on your burlesque being featured. Vince
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Date: 1/11/2010 1:44:00 PM
Many congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Donald >> James
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Date: 1/11/2010 8:14:00 AM
Well my friend, it has been some time. Did you ever publish your book? I hope so....as I have told you often...you are a terrrific writer. I would be first in line. Your old bud, Lainie
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Date: 1/11/2010 4:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Donald. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on your amazing feature poem this week! Very well deserved as always. Truly enjoyed reading. Happy New Year! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/10/2010 1:31:00 PM
Interesting use of math concepts for a creative view. I like the alliteration in the opening line. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 1/10/2010 11:57:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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