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On a Cold Winter Night

On a fantastic cloudless winter night I look at the stars, they’re all so bright Feeling the zephyr in this pacific place Viewing the trees as they swing with grace. Colder are the days, masses sick and sneezing As day by day the weather is so freezing. It is the prettiest time of the winter Winter is here with magic below O Number. Feel the sensational tresses like curls of snow And the passionate eyes like embers aglow With pale face pointing to that desire To be surrounded by subtle white fire. A weary mind at last permitted to rest musing on the fruition of how I’m blessed.
+++ December 20, 2014 Form: Rhyme

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/19/2015 10:43:00 PM
Winter is one of the most beautiful seasons, even with it's below zero temperatures and the illness that always follows... Congratulations on winning with this lovely poem! Nicely done, Dr. Ram!
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Date: 1/18/2015 2:47:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, dear friend!... Congrats on a great win!!... Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 1/18/2015 2:09:00 PM
You painted a lovely picture Dr Mehta many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/18/2015 1:28:00 PM
congratulations Dr M. another fine winning poem for sure
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Date: 1/18/2015 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram, for your lovey poetic image of Winter. Sandra
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:27:00 PM
Congrats on the win Dr....huggs
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Date: 1/17/2015 9:42:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Dr Ram
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:26:00 PM
Dr Ram, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/3/2015 9:45:00 AM
"A weary mind at last permitted to rest musing on the fruition of how I’m blessed." A very fitting ending to a wonderful write! Super 7 on this gem!!
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Date: 12/24/2014 12:52:00 PM
beautifully painted piece ram wishing you and your family a happy christmas
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Date: 12/21/2014 3:42:00 PM
Stunning picture of winter.. Iove, "subtle white fire!"... Something so delicate and white could actually burn one.. Good luck in the contest, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 12/21/2014 2:02:00 PM
Beautiful sir. I enjoyed it...Thank you very much. Best wishes to you.
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Date: 12/21/2014 10:14:00 AM
This lovely poem makes me want to stand out in the cold winter night and savor the magic of the season. So beautiful !! Have a beautiful and blessed holiday, Dr. Ram !! And thank you for your many kind comments this year...I am grateful !
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Date: 12/21/2014 9:28:00 AM
Merry Christmas Dr,truly a winter weather...huggs
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Date: 12/21/2014 6:37:00 AM
You painted a marvelous picture....Tim
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