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On a Bender

On a Bender. New Orleans, dawn, woke up on the floor of a hotel room, don’t know why I didn’t sleep in the bed. A shower, vapid water ran slowly down my body like worms they crawled around and refused to leave. In a bar where men sat in silence watching TV with sound turned off. A double whisky and the worms disappeared. Thought I can’t sit here and drink like an alcoholic, I had a bag of bacon flavoured crisps, and to show I was a man of taste I asked for Dutch beer. Time runs fast, when you are drunk, suddenly eight too late for the plane home that left at nine o’clock. One more beer and I will be ok. Got another plane, without my luggage, as I could not remember the hotel where I had slept on the floor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/15/2013 4:29:00 PM
Jan - love the Dutch beer and man of taste line. kathy amazing how easily luggage gets lost.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 9/15/2013 4:56:00 PM
just another beer and I will alright... dear it never worked
Date: 9/15/2013 8:39:00 AM
Jan, a touch night.. enjoyed the poem... Linda
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 9/15/2013 4:57:00 PM
thank you Poet Destroyer

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