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Om Shanti Shanti-2

Om Shanti Shanti Shanti: A faith-lit path in forlorn lands Hold no wrath, it's ever at hand You didn’t know it a bit, did you? Doling out truth in terms of myth Not far away to be one with And meld with the chant 'Om Shanti ' Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti There need not be any hurry Though caught in unusual worry Stealing the light from stars were you Striving for success through dare-do’s Reuse the old ruse through and through Gave once the heave-ho, Om Shanti. Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti And from the dark the blue bird sang One viewed its shades as out it rang It did't declaim in haste like you Shifting the fake to the forefront Gifting hate to the mate upfront Time to go back to Om Shanti Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti The voice that makes everyone halt The choice they make without a fault In the detours taken by you With a lease that too soon ran out Before one was up and about The help sought after, 'Om Shanti' Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti Whose was the idea of a truce The false promise that would seduce Without omission all but you Nowhere was it an entity Wherever searched for purity To fall back, spent, on Om Shanti Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti Shivering on cold river sands Sharing our paltry minds and hands Basics are wearing thin for you Suffering to arrive at last Ashore and safe so very fast Drowning only in Om Shanti Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti Shanti shanti.....Shanti shanti 29th Jan 2013 S.Jagathsimhan Nair An imperfect imitation of Leonard Cohen’s “Hallelujah”, submitted for FRANK H’s contest Entry for pd's second chance poems on 21 feb 13

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Date: 2/25/2013 4:28:00 PM
Jag' congratulations with your sweet win 'take care~SKAT
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Date: 2/24/2013 9:07:00 PM
Jag, thank you for giving me the second chance in viewing this one for my contest...CONGRATULATIONS!!! Always & Forever ;-) LINDA
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Date: 2/12/2013 10:35:00 PM
Jag, I reread it. I think you did have all the right number of syllables. I have been going through your poems looking for one I have not commented to. Maybe I should try an older page!! I'll look a bit more now.
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Date: 2/11/2013 4:28:00 PM
well, maybe it is not perfect to his rhythm? But I love the words of this one and I am wondering if you got on the winners list or not. I'll go see. I didn't make it on. I hope yours made it.
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Date: 1/29/2013 6:40:00 PM
This is well done, Jag! Absolutely great imagery which should make this one for The Winners' List! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/29/2013 10:57:00 AM
Nicely done!!!! Can you please read my poem thanks
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Date: 1/29/2013 9:04:00 AM
hi dearest Jag.. this superb.. luv it congratulation for the contest :) <3
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