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watching sunset and a game being played -- home free tag

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Date: 2/3/2012 7:57:00 AM
Hello I'm a sucker for the minimalism of haiku, how so much is expressed by so little. You lay visuals of a sumptuous summers day, with not a care in the world and for that I enjoyed this write... I also appreciate how you managed to use the central line as the divider line.. Thank you Karen
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