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Ole' Saint Nick

Too many cookies for "Ole' Saint Nick" he got hung up on a brick wedged in the flue his red cheeks turned to blue...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2014 10:51:00 PM

Rick, Congratulations on your "Christmas Character Clerihew" :) LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2014 12:25:00 PM

came to wish you a merry Christmas, rick. You are one of my fave poets. My goal is to try to contact all poets on my fave list by New years. It will be a daunting task, I have so many!!!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/20/2014 9:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, this is so funny,Rick Blessings and Merry Christmas

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/20/2014 5:12:00 PM

congratulations on your win Rick ,fun read

Rob Carmack

Date: 12/20/2014 1:17:00 PM

This is exactly why I leave the front door unlocked for him, and instead of cookies, I leave him a cigarette. Congrats Rick.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/20/2014 8:46:00 AM

My favorite I think...congrats..Im smiling. BG

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/20/2014 7:56:00 AM

Cute one Rick. Congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/20/2014 4:09:00 AM

I got a chuckle, Rick, congratulations on the win

Jan Allison

Date: 12/20/2014 2:40:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Rick-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2014 12:52:00 AM

Very SMART writing, rick. Not just saying he was fat, but SHOWING us with excellent description of him getting stuck in a flue. Congrats in my clerihew contest.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/14/2014 2:44:00 PM

This is not good, quick, call the paramedics! You made me laugh and also made me put down that second cookie. BG

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/14/2014 1:56:00 PM

Time for Santa to go on a diet! Good one, Rick, very clever! Hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2014 12:25:00 PM

made me chuckle Rick - good luck:-) hugs jan xx