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Oldest Albatross

Across the oceans crossing ferocious dark barriers of time I've floated from Midway Atoll with fervent waves that chime, humming melodies of my journeys to distant lands making my own way through colorful windy strands. I opened my eyes on a swaying grassland in recluse azure horizon kissing shades of mauve golden hues, sprinkled on sand long back as I took my first flight I remember soaring with lamb white clouds so bright. Flew across different continents in changing seasons my little ones merge my legacy with joyous reasons, I sing of raging storms and bravery on ancient beacons on voyages I calm scared souls when their spirit weakens. I find my way back home to meet my beloved every year my memories of wetland behind fierceness I hold dear, recognized as the oldest living wild bird I spread love known as 'Wisdom' I still live to soar freely high above.
Poet's Note: The oldest living wild bird(banded) is a female Laysan albatross that nests within the world's largest albatross colony on Midway Atoll National Wildlife Refuge in the Hawaiian islands. She is at least 69 years old and is believed to have laid nearly 40 eggs over her life. She survived a tsunami and was first recognized in 1956 then again over a span of many years(through her band). In 2006, she was named 'Wisdom' as a symbol of hope for all species that depend upon the ocean to survive. July 22, 2020 I am a Bird - Personification Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin ~Winner: 2nd Place

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Date: 8/4/2020 3:39:00 PM
very cool info on this bird you included at the bottom of your poem. Wonderful job describing it in your poem, Aditi! Congrats on the win.
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Date: 8/3/2020 5:35:00 AM
You excel my friend in every contest and every form you write--limitless talent reigns in your pen. BOG congrats on another splendid podium win, Aditi.
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Date: 8/3/2020 4:14:00 AM
Yes,you truly spread your wisdom like an albatross.Want you to soar even higher:-) Wonderful personification.I have read about this bird in my G.K text book Aditi mam.Had a short recall now after glancing your beautiful poem:-) Congratulations on your top win:-)Keep inspiring.I received your P.S mail,i have some errors with that page.Will reply you soon. Take care.Much love:-)
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Date: 8/2/2020 9:30:00 AM
Aditi, great personification and descriptive poem . Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/2/2020 6:37:00 AM
A nice poem along with interesting information.Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/2/2020 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Aditi, for your well-deserved win for this stunning and informative poem! My kind of poetry! Many thanks for your kind comment re my win and best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
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Date: 8/2/2020 4:46:00 AM
Aditi, Congratulations on your win and also your creation of this breathtaking poem. Howard
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Date: 8/1/2020 3:34:00 PM
This is such a beautiful, descriptive poem, Aditi! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 8/1/2020 12:40:00 PM
Aditi, congratulations on your winning placement, a well penned personification.
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Date: 7/22/2020 10:21:00 PM
Wow.. Wonderful imagery and lovely personification.. Your muse is flying like a wise Albatross.. Good luck Aditi..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:40:00 AM
Glad you love my muse Jenish! Thank you for such kind appreciation my friend :)
Date: 7/22/2020 12:54:00 PM
I've missed reading your poetry, my friend, even in the short time PoetrySoup was down. This is a delightful read of a living legacy in the bird kingdom. Well done, I enjoyed this very much ~ John
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:39:00 AM
When Poetry Soup was down, I kept wondering what if it was really the last time I'd have written a poem over here. It felt like a vacant space not being able to read from wonderful friends like you. Glad we are back here. Thank you for your delightful and appreciating words. Blessings :) Hope you are well!
Date: 7/22/2020 6:30:00 AM
Beautifully done! The Albatross is such a magnificent bird, you have captured that magnificence. My best to you in the contest Aditi! xomo
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 7/29/2020 4:37:00 AM
That's such a lovely appreciation Maureen. Glad you loved it. Thank you for your kind wishes :) Much love!
Date: 7/22/2020 6:23:00 AM
Wow! That sure is an amazing albatross, Aditi:) thank you for the information:)
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:36:00 AM
Glad you love it Jo. Thank you for appreciating :)

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