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Olden Time Chase

OLDEN TIME CHASE Hear them shout! Voices carried on olden winds Young faces peering round trees Round the corner of old houses Seen through a scrim clouding memory Oh there are Redskins! There are bandits! Guns whittled out of orange crates Horses fashioned up from movie image Hear them whinny Alive through the mouths of children Kids focused ‘neath a giant cottonwood Near the alley on a vacant lot Not a lot really But a dusty stage for many exciting plots Hear them shout! How the horses stir the dust How the Indians whoop! I hear the summer chase On sunny days When there’s not a thing to do

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/16/2011 12:38:00 PM
Have not seen any new poems lately, is there a problem? Hope everything is ok. this was a great write, enjoyed it. I will be leaving soup next week, we are doing away with the internet for awhile.
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Date: 8/2/2011 6:55:00 PM
sounds like olden days!!
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Date: 8/1/2011 1:27:00 AM
So lovely Daver...i remember being such a prissy girly girl for such games as cowboys n indians but i do recall making many a mud pie with sprinkles of grass and flowers on top for them once their games where done lol.. Thanks for my welcome to soup xxx Tracie
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Date: 7/31/2011 11:18:00 PM
Cute write dear poet...writen so nice, I'm up awfully late, and the Noah is sleep'n, but I'll be reading this one to the little cowboy ! *smiles* Have a good night sir ! Much love, james
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Date: 7/31/2011 9:56:00 PM
I'm in on the excitement here. Loved the story Daver.
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:45:00 PM
LOL Daver, your angel should be quite pleased with you. Your kindness to animals as well as humans will win you a place in heaven. Thanks for the comment, but I'd gladly take you on as an assignment if I were a guardian angel. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/31/2011 12:31:00 PM
Daver, takes me back....my aunt who was only 3 years older than me, had the Bonanza ranch with figurines an horses, came with fences and the Ranch house...we'd play with that, then gather our friends together to go to the park and play Cowboys and Indians...
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Date: 7/30/2011 9:06:00 PM
Oh Yeah! I'm there Daver! Oh crap I really am there now! We got horses on our little place. I can tell you they aren't as much fun as those imaginary ones were back then... At least those you didn't have to clean up after...heh heh. Yes I remember those fun games well in the school yard esp. Roy rogers , zorro and alot of made up heroes and villans.Oh yeah and can't forget Superman! What a super dude! Enjoyed reading this Daver
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Date: 7/30/2011 6:30:00 PM
rewind in time and u express the impressive scenes that were alive then.. and take it into today with lovely views Daver.. so happy I got my Daver fix today luv..
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Date: 7/30/2011 3:11:00 PM
Reminds me a snatch of memory from my childhood..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 7/30/2011 3:02:00 PM
Dear Daver, you brought back some gret memories for me. We would play "cowboys and indians" a lot when I was growing up. I always played the "horse" because I was good at animal voice impersonations. I would love to see the children playing like this again, but most of the ones I know are tied to video game screens. No exercise. I don't understand the appeal. Really enjoyed your poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/30/2011 1:03:00 PM
nicely done, brings back memories of my childhood. good poem. love it
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Date: 7/30/2011 10:54:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Keep them coming to us. Love, Glenna
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