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Old Woman's Hands On a Grinding Stone

The coyote circles he always circles he shadows the path of our existence set by the pattern of wind blown seeds The old man sleeps while his children play by the fire He thinks he is still the slayer of enemies that are long gone The crow waits in a ragged nest for us to move on My old heart beats like this grinding stone it beats, it beats and it beats until it is still like the dogs in the afternoon Sleep waits for me like a white wolf in the shadows of that long line of trees Patient as water he must wait for me until I finish my meal

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Date: 2/18/2016 8:56:00 AM
This is wonderful and lovely. Nice poetry here dear friend.
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Date: 12/16/2015 11:42:00 AM
This is wonderful! I look forward to reading your next. This poem has the feel of the Native American's soul with hints of sadness of past glories. #7
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/18/2015 3:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Connie. I'm glad you glimpsed the Native American trace. Allowed for I am one-quarter Choctaw.
Date: 12/13/2015 2:38:00 PM
I like your circle of life very much. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/15/2015 10:31:00 PM
Thank you very much!
Date: 12/12/2015 5:28:00 PM
Stunning imagery!
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Johnnie Hynson
Date: 12/12/2015 7:26:00 PM
Thank you very much!

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