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The wine that my ancestors drank I found in an old copper tank It was bitter and red And went straight to my head As into a stupor I sank Now the cure was much worse than the bite Unless you kept drinking all night Twas the hair of the dog Got you out of the fog Along with the early morn light Now the moral of the story I’m told Is to not drink the wine that’s this old Stick with Bartles and Jaymes And other known names Then only drink what you can hold Mdailey 6/18/11 (4:11 PM) Contest: bottle of wine

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Date: 6/27/2011 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Bottle Of Wine" contest Mike. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 10:25:00 AM
Many congrats on your three wins, Mike : )
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Date: 6/26/2011 7:23:00 AM
Congrats Mike on your HM in the wine contest with this awesome entry and write luv..enjoy special honor..luv..
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Date: 6/26/2011 4:48:00 AM
excellent Limerick, Mike. It reads very well and flows nicely alone with a story line and leson as old as time and pleasantly entertaining. My kinda Limerick. I enjoyed this one lots. Congratulations on your HM
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Date: 6/25/2011 10:36:00 PM
HI, Mike and congrats on your HM. I think your limerick has excellent meter!
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Date: 6/25/2011 5:08:00 PM
Congrats...Sara
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Date: 6/25/2011 4:27:00 PM
congrats on your HM in the contest Mike with this witty write
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Date: 6/25/2011 8:06:00 AM
Congrats. on your win!
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:56:00 PM
EXC ELLENT. Somebody who really understands limericks, not only the purpose of them but the meter as well. This is awesome writing of one, mike. I hope to see this at the top of the chart!!
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:46:00 PM
Enjoyable wit and humor, mike
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Date: 6/18/2011 3:23:00 PM
good luck in the contest,,, and please let me know if i send you an assignment already,..always,..p.d.
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Mike Dailey
Date: 6/18/2011 5:33:00 PM
Thanks for the wishes. You did send me an assignment - Public Warrant. I did write one but I am sure the 3 hour limit was passed. I entered it anyway. MIke

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