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Old Whine

I was 86 two weeks ago It's no wonder that I move slowly. My brain is racing down a track, Looking for lost bits that won't come back. My spelling is getting worse, Which upsets me and makes me feel terse Terse and frustrated, old and grey Few can understand the things I say. I do not know myself, I could be a dusty vase perched on a shelf. A vase that once was admired, Now out of fashion, no longer desired. A relic of another age Tottering on the last page Of an 86-year-old book That is nearing its end, But are there other chapters? For me and others to look at Before I go around the bend I have much to comprehend.

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Date: 10/10/2023 8:47:00 AM
I'm 83 and already feel the ageing proses. My muse has nearly left me. But you seem to be in full swing. Blessings.
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 10/10/2023 3:52:00 PM
Thank you. Victor, for your kind comments. I do not think your muse is ever far away from you; you are a gifted poet, and your poems are heartfelt, varied, wise and articulate. ( A poet in every sense of the word) At 83 and 86, we have lived a long time; even though we have been blessed, I have started to question the reason why.
Date: 10/9/2023 7:17:00 PM
The feeling - acknowledged. The possibility - detected. The challenge: to overcome the first to rise to the second. Go, girl! ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/8/2023 8:33:00 PM
This poem effectively communicates how one feels about aging. U did a great job using the vase analogy. I suppose we all mourn aging but the alternative is to die so which is worse? I like this poem because it is real.
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