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Old Vines Premiere Contest Winner

A clamorous stream of jar fly voices punctuates the dusky air, their timbale orchestra madly vibrating raucous sound. Hand brushing hand, we stand in the garden’s waning light, where fall’s pungent, spicy extracts flick from curling dry-leaf tongues, needling tears that veil your tender gaze. We are burning the nightshade garden, clearing summer’s fading feast, our fires lanterns on a hallowed meadow eve; sharp scented, sinewy tomato plants pitched to hungry flames hiss like snakes, the stray fruits sizzling, then exploding in bursts of juicy seed. You lean toward me and shadowed silhouettes twine together like old vines. Copyright, September 15, 2015 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 12/5/2017 8:02:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Faye on your wonderful win with your amazing poem.
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Date: 12/4/2017 7:22:00 PM
Congratulations, Faye, a great write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/4/2017 6:42:00 AM
great imagery! loved it thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 11/18/2017 4:50:00 PM
Wonderful imagery. Congrats on your win, Faye.
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Date: 11/14/2017 6:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win this is a beautiful poem, I love the bursting of the fruit in the end.
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Date: 11/13/2017 6:34:00 PM
Congratulations Faye on your number one placement with this beautifully written poem. Spectacular last line to end a superb write!
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Date: 11/13/2017 1:18:00 PM
Nice job here. I like the last line a lot."You lean toward me and shadowed silhouettes twine together like old vines." Congratulations on you win.
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Date: 11/13/2017 11:14:00 AM
Dramatically descriptive poem, Faye. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 11/13/2017 8:29:00 AM
This is gorgeous, Faye! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/13/2017 6:38:00 AM
Congrats Faye on your first place win! Lovely images. The last line is lovely!
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Date: 11/13/2017 2:10:00 AM
Lovely imagery and sublime metaphors, Faye. Congratulations on your Top win! Regards, John.
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Date: 10/8/2015 2:01:00 AM
Awesome write Faye, u hv a magical way with words ! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 10/3/2015 3:40:00 PM
an evening illuminating my senses... i was looking for pieces that developed fine imagery of all 3 senses, faye... sweet congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs
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Date: 10/3/2015 8:52:00 AM
Such a lovely poem, Faye. Your imagery wakes up our senses in so many ways. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/3/2015 2:27:00 AM
This poem is so creative Faye. I love the unique imagery expressed. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 10/2/2015 10:55:00 PM
Faye, Congrats on your "MIXED SENSES win" *****SKAT
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Date: 10/2/2015 7:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Wonderful write!!!!
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Date: 10/2/2015 4:26:00 PM
wowowow. One of my faves in this contest. Sizzling!! BIG congrats for your win. The last part is spectacular.
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Date: 10/2/2015 4:18:00 PM
Hi Faye! You superbly succeed in attracting our senses through delightful imagery, where sounds play a major part. ~ Congratulations on your deserved win. // paul
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Date: 10/2/2015 3:35:00 PM
absolutely delightful Faye congrats on your win - I adore the final line especially:-) hugs Jan xx
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