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Old Town Past

OLD TOWN PAST Gone: the Market where cows sheep and pigs brought telling perceptions The images, noises and smells of the farms to the town The tweeded farmers with leathery limbs and faces And gaiters of deepest sheen in a rich chestnut brown Flaxen ropes, billhooks, pitchforks enough for a peasants' uprising Spread along the High street and over the Corn Exchange square While Newport Street furnished inns for all thirsts' reviving And above all, the clock tower made skyline iconic and fair Then was school run not protected, chauffeured, in cars But raced, skipped or dawdled through field, street, market, rail station Our little world teamed with action, unscreened - no bars Of health and safety; adventure without filtration In that world we seemed in different incarnation Can we thus discern immortality's intimation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 3/2/2021 5:47:00 PM
The times and scenes of the past brought back a more peaceful worldview. Congratulations Geoffrey. SuZ
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Date: 3/2/2021 3:14:00 PM
Geoffrey, congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest with this excellent poem _Constance
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Date: 3/2/2021 9:53:00 AM
The first word "Gone:" grabs the attention and serves as a warning--a bookend of sorts to the last line. Especially appreciated your description of the leathery farmers. So much change in these modern times...
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Date: 3/1/2021 11:40:00 AM
Scenes from our old ways of life are always disappearing. I was especially moved by the way you describe today's school runs. I think it was more fun to walk to school with friends. Well penned, Geoffrey. Congratulations on a second place in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/28/2021 4:15:00 AM
When kids were taught how to think not what to think and when life was much more than an app. Another great write Geoffrey. Cheers - Gary
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