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Old Shoes

Twirling, spinning round I was a ballerina On Grandma's wood floor Buttersoft, tattered Hours of carefree dancing My shoes set me free entry into Raul Moreno's contest: Still Life No placement

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/17/2010 7:46:00 PM
Paula~ That sounds like fun I like your double senryu! Best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 4/17/2010 7:01:00 PM
There is a lot of joy in this senryu! Nicely done. :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/17/2010 5:42:00 PM
enjoyed very nicely penned!! sounds like a winner to me!!
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Date: 4/17/2010 5:29:00 PM
Enjoy the thought of you twirling on your grandmother's floor in your ballet slippers! Very nice entry, Paula. Best wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn
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