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Old Secluded Town

My first visit to that old secluded town remains afresh in memories turning brown, from faded pages I breathe in the breeze aroma of moist maple in crevices to freeze. White ferns floating midair in pairs en route hilltop as I ascended the stairs. Through shades of birch trees sunlight peeped a distant rhapsody of echoing fog heaped, I remember mother's hand in my fingers amazement of her soothing caress still lingers. Ambrosial showers of mystic blue starlight she'd narrate to me ancient stories at night, it was then that she'd gifted me my muse when her beautiful lessons dripped to fuse. "Draped love pouring to melt aching hearts believe in something completely not in parts, for you can be whoever you choose to become your reality, your acts to others will hum, if you stumble and fall to depths too low you'll learn to rise beautifully and glow". The only visit to that place still springs my strongest memory that spreads white wings, to drench me in her uplifting mellow to heal my tattered spirit whenever too lost I feel, guiding me to rise with vapors of aurora my heart still resides in her magenta aura. August 1, 2020 Dusty Old Memories Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France ~Winner: 2nd Place

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Date: 8/7/2020 12:38:00 PM
Aditi, congratulations on your win in my memories challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 8/7/2020 1:30:00 AM
- A lovely poem with dusty memories, so good to think about :) - Congratulations on your win, Aditi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/2/2020 2:54:00 PM
Such lovely poetry you create, Aditi. Methinks your mother did indeed instill the love of it in you, yet the talent was always there.
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Date: 8/2/2020 8:55:00 AM
A lovely flows of poetry...Well done
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Date: 8/1/2020 8:00:00 AM
A wonder - a work of art. Lovely. Enjoyed this tremendously. Love to you
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