Old Rusty Gate

All that's left of my childhood home, is this old rusty gate

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Paul Callus

Date: 11/11/2016 1:30:00 PM

A short write, but it evokes poignant images....a derelict house that eventually collapsed, burying so many childhood memories. A wish to open that gate and once more walk into the past.... Regards // paul

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/10/2016 8:30:00 AM

Excellent take on this challenge.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/10/2016 1:42:00 AM

I know the feeling...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2016 3:47:00 PM

A sad and nostalgic one. I like it, Alexis.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/9/2016 1:52:00 PM

that must be a mighty antique gate, alexis.... nice job!..huggs

Chris Green

Date: 11/9/2016 12:32:00 PM

A little sad but I am more than certain that rusty old gate held many memories within it's still standing shape. This was quite lovely Alexis. I could picture this.