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I remember a riding pony I had as a lad which was born blind. A filly she was born during an Arkansas blizzard and we did not know that she was blind at first for we kept our horses in our barn for several days because of the winter storm. We all had fallen in love with her by the time we learned she was blind and could not bear to put her down. I remember training her to ride after she was mature enough and I named her “Pet” for she was my riding pony. We spent many happy days together riding inside the green pastures. I remember she never refused to let me ride her even the first time. And she learned very quickly to respond to my voice and she trusted in every command that I gave her. I would say, “easy Pet” when we would come to rough terrain or an eroded ditch in the pasture. She would slow to a careful walk, in response to my voice. I would ride her down into the lower part of the pasture to the creek in hottest part of the day. Pet could of course smell the water and when she would come near the bank of the creek I would again say, “easy Pet” and she would respond by slowing to a snail’s pace down the steep bank. Pet would wade out about belly depth into the water where she would drink her fill of the cool clear water. And I would use her back as a diving board launch and swim to my heart’s delight. After she was through drinking I would climb on her back again and give her head to her and she would trot to the barn where she knew I would give her treats, such as carrots, apples, sugar cubes and so on. I remember I never did have the heart to make her run full speed as I supposed that her blindness was burden enough in her life for her to bear. It is said of truth that one gets to keep in heaven those things of this life that were loved sufficiently. I know that my beloved Pet shall be my precious playmate again in the heavenly ethereal of the Spirit. Pet lives on even now in the depths of my childhood memories. Her loving low neighs as she approached me by smell, and her nuzzles into my pocket for the sugar cubes she knew would always be there for her. In heaven I shall see my Pet again, and this time she will see me, maybe for the first time. For and in honor of Carol Brown and Contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/4/2011 2:25:00 PM
Very touchy!
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:31:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, this is a great and touching write, I actually felt tears welling up at the end, anyone who has lost a beloved pet can relate to this...
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Date: 6/28/2011 3:28:00 PM
Great story here mate, brings back memories, Here in Aus. Some horses went melon blind eating pie melons on sandhills. My dad at 12 bought a blind horse and rode hundreds of miles to be with Trapper Joe near Adavale. Gozo strange name for a horse. good on you, Don
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Date: 6/26/2011 12:52:00 AM
My eyes have welled up reading this,, I'd kept this to read later as the horse poems I didn't want to rush through and it's a long narrative so... For me this is the best in this contest. Like the horse people say,, you two joined up like no other. Love to a soul like you..and Congrats John!!!
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:14:00 PM
John, I remember this one and I am glad you won. Congratulations to you.
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John Freeman
Date: 6/26/2011 4:38:00 PM
Sorry Andrea, I didn't get around to correcting all the misspelled ridings, but it's done now. Smile
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John Freeman
Date: 6/26/2011 4:37:00 PM
Sorry Andrea, I didn't get around to correcting all the misspelled ridings, but it's done now. Smile
Date: 6/23/2011 4:30:00 PM
Congrats on your win, John. Excellent piece. Great job. Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:20:00 PM
Very touching and I do hope your Pet is running and seeing in Heaven. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/23/2011 2:31:00 PM
Many congrats on your win, John : )
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:37:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, John
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:43:00 PM
Congrats Moses my friend on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry and touching write luv.. creatively imaginative and touching too..luv..
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 10:05:00 AM
this was awesome nice to have an insight of you. cory
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:48:00 PM
Enjoyed reading a small part of your childhood..This one has winning circle written all over it..Your kind treatment of the less than perfect animal speaks so much of the kind of person that you are...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 6/14/2011 1:45:00 PM
Enjoyed reading a piece of your childhood experience..This work has winning circle written all over it..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 6/14/2011 12:25:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2011 9:33:00 AM
Dear John, this is truly a beautiful story of the kindness you showed to a blind horse and the relationship of trust the two of you developed. I see others have pointed out the typos, but truly this story is so engaging that I barely noticed them. I do hope to see Katy Cat in heaven and maybe you will ride up to greet me on Pet. Carol will adore this "Horse Story" entry, just as I do. So nice to see you posting again, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/14/2011 12:05:00 AM
a lovely horse story, moe, with an ending that truly mystifies! a winner for me..;) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:15:00 PM
lovely story, good luck in contest, typo on riding as pointed out by Andrea and another wad should be wade
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:02:00 PM
a beautiful story of a pet that you are going to see for sure in heaven, and YES, she will see you too!! This is sure to please Carol in her contest. (by they way, for ridding, put "riding")
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