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Old Naughty Neighbours Still Play Seesaw

His shadow chasing hers under the stars mirrored on the glass of their frosted window. Dim lights off , window opens Hid are all their seesaw movements Oh ,at last ! that awkward view now gone But what I cannot see, I can still hear.
A light etheree ~ Just for the fun of it : )

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Date: 3/21/2016 1:57:00 AM
Ha ha. "seesaw moments" ... I will never think of the teeter-totter in quite the same way again. Yes ... as Paul says ... the suggestion at the end only adds to the humor. Amusing Charmaine! I wonder if fictional, or based off real events?
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Date: 3/21/2016 8:03:00 AM
Fictional or not ? I didnt see but I heard. Thanks God I didnt see, our neighbours are quite old : )
Date: 11/20/2015 12:59:00 PM
Reading this made me smile--that last line did it for me, dear Charma... very creative etheree, and I agree-- very light! It was so nice to hear from you, thank you for reading and adding it to your faves.... I am glad you were able to glean what you gleaned from it. Sending you & Christina hugs!
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Date: 9/27/2015 11:14:00 AM
A very dignified descriptive etheree, Charm, while making great use of imagery. The end line is witty and suggestive. // paul
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Date: 9/26/2015 1:05:00 AM
:) What a delightful piece, my dear. Very sweetly naughty. Hugs
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Date: 9/25/2015 9:34:00 PM
You are amazing with these, Charma. WOW> Keep it up!!
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Date: 9/25/2015 8:28:00 PM
Their shadows touch in the twilight of sleepy love, fresh form filling their naughty new eyes, above the rancor of hyper hearts they know the game of lips and flame...your playfully soulful poem, written with pretty mysticism pulled this verse above out from my sensitive needs Charma. "Mirrored on the glass of their frosted window...His shadow chasing hers under the stars." Beautiful feeling and imagery...J.A.B.
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Date: 9/25/2015 5:47:00 PM
Very naughty....lol
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