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Old Me

Old me, is that you? Well I'll be damned. If I could, you know I'd shake your hand. Sit with you? No thanks, I'd rather stand, Old me. Cigarette? No thanks, I quit seven long years since filter tip lay there quivering on my lip can't say that I'm missing it, Old me. Still nursing that cold can of beer? I sank a few of them when I sat here watched a world go by that held no sense of fear and laughter was the only source of tears Old me. You're looking lean, wiry and fairly fit, hair just starting to thin a little bit. Yeah, I know my waist from where you sit is more Frank Cannon than Brad Pitt Old me. Say, who right now's your latest fling? Oh, her? Nice girl. Yes, I've got a ring. Hindsight's such a wonderful thing, no, not what I was imagining, Old me. Those plans you made, soon to begin? Life's challenges you'd take on and always win? See, by your bench, that litter bin? Well, screw them up and chuck the whole lot in, Old me. Off you go and happily skate along until the ice of youth melts and is gone for I'll tell you now, where I've come from you don't know what you're taking on, Old me. Though my future lies in wait for only you, and all that I know you will surely do, sometimes with all that I've been through I desperately wish that I was you. Hold me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/22/2015 5:49:00 PM
Revisiting this gem to now add to my favorite poems list here. The new me truly enjoys your verse about the old self left behind! Myself, I left three of them behind me, as a most stubborn lad I once was. Thanks, this is a true gem my friend!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 7/22/2015 9:03:00 PM
Thanks Robert, I'm flattered, but appreciative. I try not to look back too much; you can't drive a car looking in the rear view mirror all of the time. Regards to you and yours, Viv.
Date: 4/1/2015 11:53:00 AM
We must remind ourselves we are only here once, yet on our journey we will live many lives.We will feel every emotion.We will come to understand or we won't.For life is finite.Some will find peace with themselves, others will struggle and remain confused.Death comes for us all without mercy.How we pass through time until then is nothing more than choices.... My thoughts after reading your poem, which caused me to think.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 4/1/2015 12:43:00 PM
Thanks for taking the time to reflect, and I appreciate your feedback, Frederick. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/30/2015 4:23:00 AM
Another excellent poem - And how very true! One very famous poet once said: "After all...all that remains is the poetry". All the best!! :) john.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/30/2015 6:25:00 AM
Cheers, John. Time flies like an arrow, fruit flies like a banana. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/22/2015 5:49:00 PM
Brilliant poetry my friend.. Enough wisdom there for a book. A7 and the new me so often gets a chuckle looking back at the old me. Better to laugh than to cry about it I suppose.. I made enough mistakes for a dozen people yet survived to still prosper.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/23/2015 12:25:00 AM
Thanks, Robert. When watching the antics of blind youth make you smile, you know you're getting on.......
Date: 3/18/2015 7:07:00 PM
I love the way you talk to your old self and the creative perspective that it lends to this terrific poem! Great job! A 7 from me.
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Date: 3/19/2015 12:46:00 AM
Thank you Laura, you're very kind. I talk to myself a lot, but this is a first in writing. Interesting exercise. Love from Mister Viv x
Date: 3/18/2015 8:11:00 AM
Taking pleasure in the passing of days is a brave thing. Old is doubtless gold! #7
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/18/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thank you, Hannington, yes- we enjoy the past since there is more of it than the future. Viv
Date: 3/18/2015 3:37:00 AM
and beer!.... that fickle, warm, and cheery friend, lives on ....thank you great spirit for it's depth!....terrific poem, full of reflection and wisdom Viv....and thanks for your comment on my comp entry..I find your remarks very encouraging for my pen..Peter
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/18/2015 8:56:00 AM
Ta muchly, Peter.
Date: 3/18/2015 3:06:00 AM
Viv, am sure you have more energy for life than some of the young people. Old you, is gold. "Old me" poem is also gold. #7
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Date: 3/18/2015 8:54:00 AM
Thanks, njeri, and blessings x
Date: 3/18/2015 1:49:00 AM
Very good Viv... The value of hindsight can not be explained any better to yourself, yet for they who are yet to experience it, the lessons are ahead of them. thanks Viv - Lindsay
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Date: 3/18/2015 2:00:00 AM
Thanks Lindsay. If everyone knew then what they knew now, well- it doesn't bear thinking about. But then again if beer is the answer, what was the question again? Regards, Viv

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