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Old Man's Hands

They were once fine, long-fingered and aristocratic: photographed resting lightly on a model's shoulder as she wore a mink while clutching a Gucci. In childhood they played like all kids' hands play: clutching, grabbing, throwing, waving to unseen allies while fighting to a gory death hordes of relentless foes. In manhood they sought to caress a woman's flesh rather than play throw and catch... they explored the wondrous nooks and crannies with hunger and hesitancy, always joyfully losing themselves in her eternal unknowingness. They were mighty then, the hands of a young god, giving pleasure in equal measure to its taking... but now their skin lies cracked and shrieking of seven decades-- the fingers are bending like old trees succumbing finally to the brutal wind, with knobs sprouting from joints and a low pain taking up a permanent and most uninvited residence....

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Date: 9/23/2020 12:11:00 PM
'L.J., Congratulations, you have well captured the hands of time that some day fit us all. David'
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/23/2020 12:31:00 PM
Thank you David, much appreciated!
Date: 9/23/2020 11:07:00 AM
A great, poignant write LJ.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/23/2020 12:31:00 PM
Thanks Gary!
Date: 5/13/2020 6:38:00 PM
LJ, excellent, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/14/2020 11:02:00 AM
Thank you,Constance
Date: 5/13/2020 11:18:00 AM
So melancholy, LJ - a poem of memory and grieving. Your imagery really carries your poem from beginning to end. Congratulations on your first place win my friend.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/14/2020 11:03:00 AM
Thanks Sam--creating the poem is a [minor] consolation for getting old!
Date: 2/2/2019 8:43:00 PM
Well written verse, but sad,age does win at the end. L.J., I just turned 68 :) so it hit home . Congratulations on your win..Hugs Eve ~`*
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/3/2019 1:41:00 PM
Thank you Eve--it might cheer you up a bit to read a book a friend gave me: THE GIFT OF YEARS by Joan Chittister. It's a collection of 3 doz. short essays running the gamut from regret to freedom to ageism to spirituality, etc. all beautifully written!

Book: Shattered Sighs