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Old Man Larry

Old man Larry sat by the fire He was many years retired He worked hard when young raring his sons His wife had passed away on the fifth child He called the phone company for a reply What is wrong with my phone Your phone is fine sir why do you ask I ask because my sons don’t ring anymore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/16/2018 6:15:00 PM
Such a sad story... ;(
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/16/2018 9:14:00 PM
Hi Akkina , sad my friend but true for many :( hugs
Date: 3/11/2018 2:04:00 PM
I like this description of how we tend to look to people like phone company customer service representatives for answers to deep and universal problems. As someone who works in customer service, I constantly try to think of answers.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/11/2018 2:40:00 PM
Hi Amy , thank you for your comment , yes you are right I do think a lot of people are hoping that customer service is a listening service ::))) hugs
Date: 3/10/2018 8:13:00 AM
Oh what a sad ending and how true for so many people... Children seem to forget what sacrifices parents made..
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/10/2018 8:16:00 AM
Hi Silent One , so true my friend ::)))
Date: 3/9/2018 7:06:00 PM
Great poem about how sadly very often sons aren't as good at maintaining contact as daughters. A delightful write, Niall.
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/10/2018 1:33:00 AM
Hi Line , So true my friend , thanks for comment ::)) hugs
Date: 3/9/2018 1:53:00 PM
Sadly it happens to a lot of old people and their families too busy with their own lives. Loneliness is terrible thing to have to endure. Tom
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/9/2018 2:06:00 PM
Hi Tom , yes indeed my friend it is reality but there are some beautiful people out there helping with lots of love in there hearts , if we all called just once a week into some one old what a change it would be ::)))
Date: 3/9/2018 1:48:00 PM
- A sad story that is the reality for many, Niall - Love it :) - Happy weekend, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Niall Fulham
Date: 3/9/2018 2:01:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , thank you for comment and a very happy weekend to you too ::)))) hugs

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