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wrinkled weathered face gnarled hands i grasp with love you are my sweet dream in this world and yet the next throughout time i'll walk with you for contest"We Aren't Japanese BUT Please!" sponsored by Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 2/25/2011 6:13:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of debbie, Deb
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deb, in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:04:00 PM
Made me tear up...now that speaks for real love. congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 2/24/2011 7:07:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your great big win in the Japanese contest luv.. a super cool write ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/24/2011 12:49:00 AM
lovely work that really deserves a big win, deb.. happy cheers to you.:) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:52:00 PM
a tender tanka, Deb. Big congrats to you!
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:16:00 PM
Many congrats Deb on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/23/2011 8:03:00 PM
Beautiful love. many congrats.
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Date: 2/23/2011 1:30:00 PM
such tenderness...a fine write..proud to have you up there with the winners Light & Love and Congrad's
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:49:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your well deserved win in the contest with this beautiful entry---kashinath
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