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Old House Song

Crossing over the threshold creaks as loud as thunder wallpaper peeling from years of old like all of its memories of yonder The wallboards and the floors just bursting to tell their many stories of yore that only they knew too well An old fireplace in its grandeur with cracked bricks and holes still has the same majestic hearth heart of a loving home Now leaning in sadness empty and all alone with loving care and tenderness will again be a beautiful home So as I strive to bring its beauty back to life again I can hear the old house sing its proud song as it did once then

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/9/2011 4:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals TuLisha. Love Carol
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Date: 2/21/2011 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup TuLisha. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2009 10:10:00 AM
Tulisha, Nice imagery. I like it. Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Ernilando
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Date: 4/9/2009 5:55:00 AM
Old houses seem to have a spirit of their own. (...maybe a few ghosts, too. just kidding) Enjoy the restoration. As you siad, the house will stand proud once again. Congratulations on being featured. Smiles from Dane.
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Date: 4/8/2009 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week. Nice imagery, lovely poem. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/8/2009 8:00:00 PM
Tulisha- Love your name - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/8/2009 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Well Done -great imagery! Laura :)
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:20:00 PM
"Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:23:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for a nostalgic write. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Beautiful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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