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Old Grandma's Eyes Bold

needle's hole old grandma's eyes bold tries with thread nice her eyes gives life by caring matured star

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/12/2012 8:57:00 AM
So visual I can just see Grandma threading the needle hole her eyes strained open bulging out her soul And again I love your succinct style
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Date: 9/11/2012 9:40:00 PM
this is a really nice one. I love the imagery of your senryu.
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