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Old Church Premiere Contest Winner

I've watched the isles at dusk Cool and mysterious they lie-- Where old and deep-boughed cedars heave, as gleaned from a cloudscape on earth's threadbare attic, While lines of faded stars slip into gauzy white-- to appear like brushed, eerie ghosts on howling psalms that sought the need to settle in the vault of an empty, ruined church. Brian's Select 4

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/18/2017 7:53:00 AM
Gorgeous piece Gabby, a winner indeed :) xomo!
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Date: 12/21/2016 5:16:00 PM
Great write and win...Congrats
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Date: 12/21/2016 3:56:00 AM
Well done Gabby, congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/20/2016 8:54:00 PM
Very nice poem, Gabby! It's like being a fly on the wall in an empty and abandoned church - you described it so vividly and interwove it with feeling. Congratulations on your first place win ... CayCay
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Date: 12/20/2016 11:47:00 AM
I like this...but for me it has a comforting feel to it not a sinister one. Nicely done, Gabby. My warmest regards...And a merry Christmas! :) john
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Date: 12/19/2016 2:48:00 PM
very cool, this had a dark and sinister feel though it was beautifully enchanting. Nicely done.
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