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Old Bill

Old Bill (written by by Steven Cooke) Old Bill died today He was a grumpy old sod said Mrs. Grey. Fool thought me, For you do not know what memory is He was a decorated soldier who, Courted beautiful women Argued with royalty And dined with the Aga Khan For Oscar Wilde and Keats was his tipple, But women cheated him And his money cheated him. And finally time cheated him All gone now, Just silence echoed by a distant memory, Interrupted by Coronation Street, and Eastenders Is this the legacy, of modern Life. For Bill, all that is left is the shell And now that has gone. Yes he was a grumpy old man But Modern life too will be cheated by time, And what memories will it leave, And what will people say about you Mrs. Grey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/24/2011 4:57:00 PM
Wow, one I haven't read - that's great! When they get bent over and hard of hearing some forget they are human. Too bad, most made significant contributions too. Thoughtful tverse Steven, always enjoy what you write! :)
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Date: 8/13/2011 10:47:00 AM
A well-penned, thought-provoking piece. Nicely done. Robert.
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Date: 8/1/2011 10:02:00 PM
Disposition is final, yet the ambienance of essence still live on in the heart and mind. Speak not of the departed fore they will live out eternalty in the blessed house of the Lord for ever and ever! Just call him a friend. Good write-up! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS
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Date: 8/1/2011 9:54:00 PM
Disposition is final, yet the ambienance of essence still live on in the heart and mind. Speak not of the departed fore they will live out eternalty in the blessed house of the Lord for ever and ever! Just call him a friend. Good write-up! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS
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Date: 7/28/2011 5:06:00 PM
wow...welcome t o the SOUP ....... this is strong stuff and wel l written...may I suggest that you dont call all your stuff "I dont know" ....... better to call it "free verse" which is what it is....or if you prefer, you can call it "prose poetry"....best wishes
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:10:00 AM
this one got me smiling and keeping it Steven. I enjoyed the style.
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:33:00 PM
Creative and lovely expressions on Old sid
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:11:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoy the site with its many features as u continue to share creative poetry as this gem with luv...
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