Old Age Home

coffee or bed – then she put my straw in her spout cup

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 3:13:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line, Kai :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/28/2020 3:18:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:38:00 PM

Great Monoku, Kai, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/28/2020 3:19:00 AM

Thanks Eve

Bobby May

Date: 8/26/2020 3:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement, This should have been 2nd place I tried to change it but couldn't Sorry!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/28/2020 3:14:00 AM

Thank you Bobby.

Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/24/2020 11:06:00 PM

Oh Yay! I forgot about love. Your mysterious mind chugs through bends and beauty at quite a rate! Did you think of this just now for the Monoku? Is it a running joke you have with your wife? ...... more warped than I thought you were!