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Old Age

Cherry Blossoms Bloom Turns green in a few months Withers to orange As the leaves fall to earth As I too wither with it

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/23/2016 9:54:00 PM

Nice to see this one again, Ivan. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/16/2016 5:43:00 PM

Hi Ivan, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/12/2013 10:26:00 AM

Hello, Ivan...,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Aiyah Torres

Date: 12/12/2013 10:04:00 AM

Welcome to PSoup, Ivan :)) Hope you enjoy sharing your talent here...same thing as I do...:") People here are so kind and supportive...Just keep on penning ;)) :') =))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/12/2013 7:48:00 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Ivan ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/12/2013 6:30:00 AM

Nice expressions on old age, Ivan