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Ol Billy Hail

Ol Billy Hail He was tough as a nail. He would out work any man, with just his left hand. He had a heart of gold, Is what the story told. Always singing a song, as he worked along. He sang " So lonely, I wanna change the world, Then I'll get to kiss the right girl." To change the world, he tried But in the end he just died. Only to be remembered as the man that cut timber. The Life of A Fictious Person Ol Billy Hail Poetry Contest.

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Date: 9/29/2013 10:41:00 AM
Angela, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA
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Date: 6/14/2010 10:32:00 AM
This certainly tells the story of Ol Billy Hail. He sounds like a great guy. I like the rhyming sequence and the flow of the words. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 4/29/2010 4:38:00 PM
It is a nice picture of a nice manly, man! Reminded me of Ole Dan Tucker....Light & Love
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Date: 3/31/2010 10:10:00 AM
Excellent here, Angela. Good luck in the contest and have a great week!
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Date: 3/9/2010 12:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Angela. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Hoping for the best to you in the contest Angela. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2010 11:54:00 AM
VERY GOOD WRITE I ENJOYED THIS FALESHIA
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Date: 3/9/2010 9:26:00 AM
Hey, this is a pretty good entry for the contest. Enjoyed reading about Bill! good luck in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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