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Oklahoma's Spring

spring is here! spring is here! proclaimed the cheerful birds, they sung it up to the sky so the wind would take there words. The wind replied "spring is here!" while he blow a wind so warm, they where so wrapped up in all there cheer they didn't see the storm. the storm crashed agents the sky! BOOM! CRASH! they sky began to cry. BOOM! CRASH! all the creatures stopped there cheers. they thought that spring had come, all there minds where filled with fears when the thunder played its drum. a little rabbit ran away he went home to tell his momma, he asked her why that sky was gray she replied "son its Oklahoma."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/23/2009 3:50:00 AM
I hear on tv of the storms that are dangerous there because of the flat terrain. Nicely written. It drew me in. Very descriptive. Sara
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Date: 5/5/2009 11:53:00 AM
Nice use of imagery and welcome to the soup. I look forward to reading more of your work...Raul
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