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Ok Honey Bun My Shining Sun

Ok honey bun my shining sun among the loving blaze of fire you run. Tuns of blazed loving power, in a shining sun. On a blazing sun of love you run until your time to sleep. leap honey bun, leap honey bun, leap to sleep. Ok honey bun my looming moon,sweep your feet like a broom, off the sun on the moon,to enjoy a rest in looms cradle . Ok honey bun my shining sun tomorrow on the sun ill see you run,on flames of loving fire ill see you run. sweet,sweet,sweet honey bun never melting on my loving sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/15/2012 9:13:00 PM
AAAAAAAAAWWWW what a poet!
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Date: 4/11/2012 1:25:00 AM
delighted by this charming piece, eliot... the repetition works and so does "honeybun"... :) huggs!
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/11/2012 1:31:00 AM
thank you much.
Date: 4/10/2012 11:43:00 PM
This is a sweet read, elliot :D I enjoyed how you used terms of endearment here :D It somehow also reminded me of You are My Sunshine :D
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Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet
Date: 4/11/2012 12:21:00 AM
thank you...

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