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Oh To Be That Butterfly

It's now the heart of the summer Perched on parched, I on this leaf Rains are forever cried for To moisten and rid earths grief Suddenly I hear a rustling Corn stalks bend and sway A creature just so beautiful Allures these words I say As I talk I feel their excitement Describing this beauty so fair Porcelain skin she is With shoulder length blonde hair Curvaceous now shows as she bares As the sky mimics her eyes Azure blues capture my thoughts Whilst the clouds begin to cry A light shower falls Cobb's become pert at attention Words described through my eyes My thoughts in quiet mention To a filling creek she walks Slowly immersed in natures champagne As the heavens caress her body Translucent pure virginal rains Her hands caress her body Blonde hair, now a wetted mane Droplets run down her curves I, a Butterfly, in distant frame http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love-17.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/24/2014 6:40:00 AM
very descriptive and sensual. i love this piece!
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James Fraser
Date: 10/24/2014 2:25:00 PM
About a Butterfly on a leaf, seeing a blonde maiden bathing - James :)
Date: 10/10/2014 9:33:00 AM
lovely images for a beautiful God made creature the butterfly.. awesome write from the first til the last.. :D
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James Fraser
Date: 10/10/2014 11:44:00 AM
Thank you Petite Poetess, glad you liked one of my nature poems. I really need to write some more of them, James :)
Date: 4/5/2011 12:06:00 PM
Nature's champagne ..James a very special phrase luv.. to compliment this splendid poem written so beautifully with fantastic imagery and bold visuals.. lovely as the butterfly ..my favorite sight in Spring ...
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Date: 4/5/2011 8:19:00 AM
A colorful story,and a fantasy of heaven.. .beautiful. .tmfs
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Date: 4/4/2011 4:03:00 PM
Ah, James, this is a special type of butterfly, isn't it? Such a romantic poem. Perhaps one day you will get to meet this "butterfly" and fly together across the Scottish heather. Beautifully written. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/3/2011 7:00:00 PM
such a vivid picture of the butterfly, a very touching piece. i love to watch them as they go from place to place and land, then move on, thank you for posting it for us to enjoy. thank you for reading my the pond and for your comment
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Date: 4/3/2011 9:26:00 AM
Oh how beautiful this is James, the images you stunningly brought them to live, as if painted with your words.. I quite enjoyed this one, thanks for taking me away :)
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:20:00 PM
Very descriptive and passionate work..Sara
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Date: 4/2/2011 7:55:00 AM
Excellent write here James!Enjoyed.Thanks for visiting my pages--kashinath
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Date: 4/2/2011 4:44:00 AM
I am LOVE this poem ! Its the first one ive read so far, and now I cant wait to read the rest!!
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Date: 4/1/2011 10:49:00 PM
wow, one of your most beautiful poems definitely, James. I really enjoyed this one from y ou!!
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Date: 4/1/2011 5:52:00 PM
just lovely James
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Date: 4/1/2011 4:03:00 PM
Beautiful, James. Can't wait to see my fav things soon. I will add this to my list of Favs. Peace and love, Annalise
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Date: 4/1/2011 3:19:00 PM
Beautiful Poetry My friend... Im so gladed you liked me writing outside the box... always Michael
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Date: 4/1/2011 1:39:00 PM
smashing images of sensuality with heightened poetic tonality, james... wow! :) huggs, nette
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