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Oh sweet dagger! Stop your twisting, Lost memories bring me weeping; Each time I think of the beauty, Love- lost for all eternity. Will this heart ever stop bleeding? I see you when I am dreaming, But day time stabs bring back grieving; My life has lost its harmony. Oh sweet dagger! Beloved- stay in my dreams creeping, Please, don't be that lady laughing; Or that man watching me sadly, A baby crying mournfully; Or that handsome guy smiling. Oh sweet dagger! ____________________________ July 10, 2016 Poetry/Rondeau/"Oh Sweet Dagger" Copyright Protected, ID 07-807-751-10 All Rights Reserved, 2016, Constance La France For the Standard contest, Make Me Feel It sponsor, Becca Teagon, Judged 08/2016 Honorable Mention

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Date: 7/15/2016 5:02:00 AM
Congrats BW, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/14/2016 2:44:00 PM
Living through tragedy indeed, does feel like a dagger to the heart. The bleeding lasts forever, but somehow it doesn't keep us from waking up each day to a new sun. We must keep on, keeping on.. in spite of "feeling" the pain. Great Rondeau, BW !
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Date: 7/13/2016 8:17:00 PM
This is an awesome Rondeau, BW! Thank you for entering my contest and congrats on your Honorable Mention.
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Date: 7/11/2016 11:07:00 PM
Hi BW, and emotional, sad write.
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Date: 7/11/2016 10:29:00 AM
Broken Wings, I love rondeau now! You write them well lady, good luck :)-luloo
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