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Oh My Dear Son, If Only You Knew

Just turned seventeen when I took the shilling Got a smart uniform, and some shiny boots too Then off to camp to learn about killing, Oh my dear son, if only you knew. Next stop was France, a young lad abroad How welcoming and warm we found the French, But ideas of adventure are put to the sword When you're standing knee deep in mud in a trench. The shelling was awful, it scared me to death A voice shouted duck! there's one coming through Many of my mates then took their last breath Oh my dear son, if only you knew. I'm yer old dad, but once I was young too But my youth was tainted for I lived with killing, And I saw such horrors I'd dare not tell you, You did what they said, once you took the shilling. Even today I hear wounded men screaming I see the face of the man my bayonet ran through, I charge the barbed wire every night as I'm dreaming, Oh my dear son... if only you knew. Entry for If only you knew Poetry Contest Sponsored by Silent One. 24/8/2019. Placed 2nd.

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Date: 9/9/2019 10:05:00 AM
A big big congratulations to you edar friend. This is lovely. So so beautiful.
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/9/2019 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Funom. :)
Date: 8/31/2019 3:16:00 PM
- Congratulations Gary, on your winning poem, a really special poem ... so many who do not understand - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/31/2019 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 8/29/2019 3:57:00 PM
Many a soldier will feel this way, the horrors of war stay with us.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/29/2019 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. :)
Date: 8/25/2019 9:47:00 AM
Powerful! If only they knew. But, unfortunately, to this day, after thousands of years of history, yet experience is the only teacher. God help us all! Great writing!
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/25/2019 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Joe. :)

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