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Can you hear the church bells ringing, along the Mississippi Bayou, Or smell the fragrant perfume of the spring magnolia’s in Full blossoms bloom, oh how sweet the air of Louisiana, It calls unto this country girls inner soul, come home my Child here all are welcome. Beneath her Spanish moshes long eye lashes of beauty, A queen of southern charm does exist, mystery’s elegant Enchantress the bell of New Orleans, dancing under her Masquerades mask of perfection. The river boats stream along the sandy banks of the delta, Brushing against the currents of fortunes favor, Ever clicking, rattling the timbers of the shoreline, In the wakes quaking divide, amidst the hushes rush broken, Behold the bounty of the mighty river, in the golden Twilight’s hour just before dawn. Steeped in tradition’s ethnic flavor of the French Cajun blend, what a spicy mixing's gumbo, Of history and culture, a tasty recipe placed on The menu of life done the southerner way. Thrown are the nets of discovery, On this ever changing landscape of natures Wilderness left wild and free, as the winds Blow through the willow pines, echoing down The swampy essences of the haunting bayou. Cotton Plantations, civil war monuments, Your history is the stuff of legends and mythology, Textured, layered upon the historic bricks of A foundation of freedoms calling, in this Place called America. To walk in the footsteps of mine own four Fathers, step by step you’re the legacies Treasury for future generations to come, So they may experience the old world Flavor of a nation’s past, preserved in this Garden of history, known as Louisiana. Can you hear the church bells ringing, along the Mississippi Bayou, Or smell the fragrant perfume of the spring magnolia’s in Full blossoms bloom, oh how sweet the air of Louisiana, It calls unto this country girls inner soul, come home my Child here all are welcome. BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/16/2015 8:53:00 PM
Beautiful landscape my dearest friend. I read your comments you sure have me smiling from ear to ear.
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Date: 7/18/2015 8:02:00 PM
wow, this is a masterpiece tribute poem for Louisiana! is this for the contest of Judy? Did you know she is in this state too? (not sure if it is her birth state, but if this is for her contest, she will adore it) Then again, maybe her contest was just for flags. Anyway, I am glad I found this one of yours to read!
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Date: 7/18/2015 8:02:00 PM
I am dying one day to see New Orleans.
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Date: 7/2/2015 12:07:00 AM
Love this one, It makes me feel like I want to visit, Louisiana, Ah........what a wonderful place, I would be there at the drop of a hat if I could afford it, mind you I am on my way to winning big money on the lottery, won small amounts on the last two weeks so you never know, I might turn up on your doorstep, take care my dear friend.......Vera........
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Date: 6/14/2015 9:46:00 AM
Cherl, your imagery and descriptive powers make Louisiana sound so very attractive. Your opening and closing lines are beautiful. Top marks for you. Regards...paul
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Date: 6/9/2015 9:38:00 PM
Musical, picturesque, full-flavored and delightful......you paint a satisfying and delicious picture of the state where I was born: a love song to "home."
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Date: 6/9/2015 3:37:00 PM
You describe Louisiana so beautifully; it's been through such hardship and still it arises. Well done.
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Date: 6/9/2015 11:46:00 AM
What a great insight and fabulous piece Cheryl. excellent write.......A.M.
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Date: 6/8/2015 10:00:00 PM
Why Cheryl my dearest friend. I've been through Louisiana so many times. Perhaps one day in the future, you will show me the landscapes you speak of in this poem. Your poem is a wonderful delight to read. A dreamy golden twilight. Enjoyed... LINDA
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Date: 6/8/2015 9:18:00 AM
A titillating epic that deserves all the honor. 7+!
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