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Oh How You Play Me

Oh how you play me Sway me Love to slay me You game of prey me Oh how you entice me Spice me Naughty and nice me Heart on ice me Oh how you move me Groove me Smile of approve me How you behoove me Oh how you thrill me Kill me Fantasy quill me How you love fill me Oh how you tame me Game me Passion bright flame me Oh how you blame me Oh how you tease me Pleases me Love and release me How you caprice me Oh how you taste me Lace me You love to race me How you unchaste me Oh how you draw me Thaw me You love to awe me Oh how you flaw me Oh…oh how you play me!!! Eileen Manassian

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Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 8/28/2014 1:21:00 PM

are you sure this isn't lyrical? It seems to have the same tempo a song might have. Still enjoyable though- good piece

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/28/2014 1:29:00 PM

I appreciate this insight, Karl. I will change the category to lyric. I never thought I could write lyrical pieces. Thanks for the input.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/22/2014 8:20:00 AM

I do not think he will be able to tame you. If he try's he is a fool and does not deserve you. This was passionate and fun Eileen.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/22/2014 8:37:00 AM

:) Thank you for saying that, Richard. Thank you for reading and commenting. Glad to have your vote of confidence on my work.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/20/2014 9:32:00 AM

Mind blowing Eileen! Ur write is magnetic dear friend!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/21/2014 3:22:00 AM

DR UPMA... :) :) :)...There is your pretty avatar come to say hello! HUGS to you from my heart!

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/20/2014 1:23:00 AM

Oh how you ravish me, ripen me, take the rules right out of me...I could not resist to play rhyme and romance with you Eileen. You've got one special Muse to write a masterpiece like this for! Every verse is so tight and right, and the reps of Me are a delight. This is an awesome ride and write, and another FAV. Eileen...J.A.B.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 3:11:00 AM

:) JUSTIN!!!!! Hello! :) You like this piece...I'm glad. It's a little different, but different is good sometimes. Sometimes playing games can be fun...I know the rules, and I can break them! It's all about the win, Justin. To win a heart...can there be a greater thrill? I don't think so. Glad you took time to play! :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/19/2014 7:01:00 PM

Oh how you draw us to your poetry sweet Eileen with that sweet desire and certain words which makes me ponder.May He plays with you and not play you..cause your heart deserves the best.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 3:07:00 AM

Thank you, Charmaine...Playing can be fun, but playing someone...NOT! Life is a game...Lovely to have someone on my side. Hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2014 5:33:00 PM

love all those monorhymes that are coming in front of Me word. It's a great sound!! A cleverly formatted poem.

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/19/2014 5:16:00 PM

Oh sweetie, this must be a lusting kind of Tuesday, there is so much fire in the soup! I love this, this is the kind of poetry that gets my heart pumping! That line--fantasy quill me-- amazing, you always inspire me! :) You rock!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2014 3:06:00 AM

Fire warms the heart, my dear. Glad you like it...It is a new kind for me...I'm usually old school sort of gal, but what the hey...now and then, a change is good! Hugs!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/19/2014 3:11:00 PM

Oh how your words get to me...deep inside of me...not releasing me...tantalizing me....oh how I long for you with me...our fantasy...beautiful Eileen....love the power and raw emotion...hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2014 3:15:00 PM

Tim...I see this write inspired you! If I could tuck away a post and savor it on a rainy day...this would be it, my dear. Sunshine to my heart! You are a good man, Tim. Thank you for visiting...and for calling me beautiful. You don't know how much I need that right now. Hugs....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2014 2:03:00 PM

- A play with fire ..... dangerous !!! - Lovely written dear friend!!! - - - Reply from my footle - my name is not: Andrea Footle !!! Me blond,yes !!! ...you have to read it again, my dear friend Eileen :)))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2014 2:14:00 PM

I did, my sweet Sunshine! My brain is fried! SO Sorry! It is a lovely footle! Good luck on the contest! Hugs