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Oh, How I'D Show You Your Eyes

It’s rare you meet a mortal Whose body is a riddle Whose body is riddled with moonlight shrines Whose Heaven is her Whose God is the thought of herself Whose eyes are tiles in Turkish bath houses Whose hair is a house abandoned with the ghosts of children Whose walk would make a cat ride turtleback Who is both shy as a baby fox in a tree Yet as confident as a wolf under the naked moon To watch you… To watch you bathe your feet in the dew-dropped grass To smell the morning air that mothers the train horn of you waking up I don’t know But I want you. My heart floats down the creek in the cemetery Alongside the pear trees Glass stepping-stones Two-stepping wind chimes The silence hangs on the beach-white trellises. I am able to think quicker because I have you near me Like the ancients with their Gods And your God is the thought of yourself And your Heaven is you I belong to you. I trace my hands down your body Navigate your mouth with my tongue And beat with your heart. That’s why my palms are so smoothed My mouth is so free And my love is so submissive. Oh, how I’d show you your eyes Your bloodshot eyes your pupils Your eye blinks turn the pages and keep me reading the story.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/24/2016 8:43:00 AM
I found your first poem and the poetic talent it reveals is quite inspiring to see. You did weave a bit of magic with your golden needle on this one.
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Date: 1/11/2016 7:46:00 PM
Firstly, thanks for the visit T.D. First post down and you have hit the road running. Love rolls gently off your pen. The journey begins, enjoy it my friend. May your pen keep running gold....Vladislav.
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Date: 1/11/2016 9:56:00 PM
Thank you for the ever so kind words, V.R.!! I am glad I am doing some good here haha, thank you so much for reading!
Date: 1/6/2016 12:21:00 AM
Hi Thump, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/11/2016 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, PDA! :)
Date: 1/5/2016 8:34:00 AM
Interesting write. Certainly not the usual lines associated with the subject. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Hope you enjoy it here. Kim
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Date: 1/11/2016 1:51:00 AM
Thanks Kim, happy to be here! Thanks for welcoming me :)
Date: 1/5/2016 4:41:00 AM
- A truly wonderful poem, Trump - Welcome to P - Soup - I wish you a happy new year, here with us :) - hugs form Norway // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/11/2016 1:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne Lise! I am happy to be here :) & happy new year to you as well!
Date: 1/5/2016 12:51:00 AM
Thump,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 1/5/2016 1:27:00 AM
Thanks for welcoming me, SKAT A! Happy to be here with all of you fellow poets, I'm looking forward to reading some inspiring work and posting some hopefully-enjoyable work as well!

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