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Oh How I Miss You

Oh, how I miss you moonlight dances, so do we, miss you though we’ve never met... not met but in dreams, I dream of you dreaming me into lucid existence. For Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer's Sedoka contest.

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Anil Deo
Date: 8/8/2018 5:44:00 PM
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Phil, best wishes on the BOOK - I know the Universe will reward you. Your voice is needed in these times. I pray for rxcellent sales. amen in the LORD. shalom, shalom
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Anil Deo
Date: 8/7/2018 5:37:00 PM
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It is a Winner! Are you coming back soon, Phil? Not only a great poet and writer, we miss your encouragement. ShalomShalom
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Phil Capitano
Date: 8/8/2018 7:16:00 AM
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Thanks Anil, you are too kind. I am still here although I visit less because I am building my poet presence in other places, selling my work and working on a second book. Peace to you always.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/3/2018 8:43:00 AM
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This is a beautiful Sedoka. I dream of you dreaming me into lucid existence. Wow! Who writes like this? You, Phil, you!
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Phil Capitano
Date: 5/3/2018 9:36:00 AM
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Thanks for the accolades Caren. :)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/16/2018 2:23:00 PM
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Hello Phil, your poem is beautiful. I read your poem as a romantic poem,even though you never met. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/17/2018 9:04:00 AM
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You have a great day to my friend.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/17/2018 7:26:00 AM
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Thanks Darlene for stopping by and commenting. There is a second part to this piece that I have since added. Have a great day :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 9/24/2017 9:38:00 PM
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I enjoy everything you write Phil, this is no exception!
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Michael Bell
Date: 9/3/2017 2:57:00 PM
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With dreams like this, you can go places, Phil , well done
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Phil Capitano
Date: 9/4/2017 5:00:00 AM
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Thanks for visiting. Namaste.
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 8/29/2017 8:07:00 AM
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Wonderful! :) xomo!
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Agnes Krampe
Date: 8/25/2017 5:53:00 PM
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I love the last two lines - gorgeous. Congrats on your placement, Phil.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 8/26/2017 5:14:00 AM
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Thanks Agnes, I read your winning entry ~ what a corker! Loved the 'greedy eyes' line. Ciao.
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Joseph May
Date: 8/24/2017 5:55:00 PM
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Congrats on your win Phil
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/24/2017 5:48:00 PM
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Very nice, Phil, love your work - congrats, my friend! :-)
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Phil Capitano
Date: 8/25/2017 6:57:00 AM
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Thanks bud. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2017 5:36:00 PM
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Congratulations Phil! :)
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Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer
Date: 8/24/2017 5:26:00 PM
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Nice fantasy touch Phil.
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Phil Capitano
Date: 8/25/2017 6:57:00 AM
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Thanks Cecelia, this was a first for using this form.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 8/22/2017 10:24:00 AM
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Nice job Phil...great first attempt...best of luck...this is going to be tough to judge...god bless...^WW^
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/20/2017 10:31:00 PM
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This is a great entry for the contest Phil. Your last line is brilliant! : )
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Phil Capitano
Date: 8/21/2017 7:16:00 AM
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Thanks Connie, this is my first attempt at Sedoka; fingers crossed.

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