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Oh Happy Day

My son smiled at me today Said, “Dad, let’s go out and play” Under the sun’s golden ray My son smiled at me today My daughter hugged me after lunch Said, “I love you a whole bunch” In milk, our cookies we did dunk My daughter hugged me after lunch My wife kissed me in the night With that look of pure delight A sign everything in my world is right My wife kissed me in the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/6/2012 7:05:00 PM
This is a poem that brings me a :-) Very nice.
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Date: 1/6/2012 2:12:00 PM
Sweet !!! Enjoyed !!
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Date: 1/5/2012 2:17:00 PM
Nice write. Its a unique style indeed. - JH
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Date: 1/4/2012 6:51:00 PM
A wonderful day, indeed. Good one, Joe. Love, Kim
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Date: 1/4/2012 4:49:00 PM
aww... this is soooo sweeet dear poet. the rhythm is excellent and the words are perfect. A wonderful poem filled with love and joy.. Love Maryam
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Date: 1/4/2012 1:08:00 PM
very touching! it does sound like a great day.
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