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Oh Deer, You Again

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Oh DEER, You again…. At the crack of dawn Outside my bedroom window Unexpected noise? Chewy, crunchy, crumbly ……I’m trying to sleep Oh dear! deer is staring at me fearlessly Uninvited guest crackling my succulent plants for breakfast Astonishing red, orange and pink sky at sunset Oh dear, You again…… And you even brought a friend! Sipping heavenly rainwater in Bromeliad’s central reservoir Oh dear, dinner menu upgraded to cabbage-like Mauna Loa succulents large flat leaves frilled at burgundy edges. But pink showy flowers wavy, ruffled, bumpy thick foliage leaves - absolutely your favorite Dark in late evening Two yellow dots shinning in mystic hill Oh dear, You again……

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