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Oh Dear My, Butterfly

Oh dear my, Butterfly With your awkward flight that looks not right, does this cause you pain ? Your beauty though proceeds you, but is it all in vain ? You are a wondrous sight that beckons me to gaze. In stillness you are a jewel amongst a flowery maze. It is a cruel joke has been laid upon your wings. Flukes of nature are those monstrous silly things. It was you that taught me empathy, I do so feel your plight. Is beauty that emboldens you, but your flight is not quite right. RC Butterfly Contest for Men.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/19/2015 9:11:00 AM
Interesting thoughts! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/18/2015 11:24:00 PM
Great take with this lovely poem Randall.. Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/18/2015 4:09:00 PM
Congrats on he place achieved Randall.
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Date: 12/18/2015 1:55:00 AM
Randall, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA
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Date: 12/15/2015 7:12:00 AM
Butterfly is so symbolic in your write Randall, for me its with double meaning.. =`) beautiful flow accompanied with imagery!~Olive eloisa =`)
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Randall Conklin
Date: 12/17/2015 11:01:00 AM
Thank you, It is more then just about the butterfly glad you saw it :)

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