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Oh Carol

On Christmas Eve, Oh Carol! Put on risqué apparel - Santa and elves in eyeball thwack, A little drummer boy in shock! December 26, 2021

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Date: 1/12/2022 8:51:00 PM
"drummer boy in shock!" - Beautiful scene-making. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/12/2022 9:36:00 AM
Delightful humor ~
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Date: 1/9/2022 9:46:00 AM
this is so fun and risque. Love it!!
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Date: 1/9/2022 9:08:00 AM
Margarita, congratulations on your winning placement, this made me laugh!
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Date: 12/27/2021 6:56:00 AM
"Oh Carol, put on your risqué apparel" I like that! Nicely written, Maggie. Hugs, John
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 10:16:00 AM
You're adding a possessive pronoun to a risque, my friend:) xoxo
Date: 12/27/2021 6:30:00 AM
Oh Carol…Carol..tch..tch (wagging finger) LOL
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/27/2021 10:16:00 AM
:) M.

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